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Want to Know How Agents, Publishers and Readers Will React to Your Book? You Need a Professional Developmental Edit.

I’ve worked with hundreds of new and experienced writers to get their books ready for publishing, and the most important step is identifying key opportunities to make the book as strong as it can be with a Developmental Edit. What if I could teach you to find these key opportunities in the book you're writing (and all future books you write!) in just 4 weeks? 

Maybe you’ve…

  • Stared at your draft for months, rewriting sentences, and wondering if you're making your book better or worse
  • Shared your draft with friends and family, who are proud of you and tell you it's great but don't have the skills (or the heart!) to show you what's still missing
  • Got feedback from  Beta readers, critique partners, or inexpensive editors, and their advice is conflicting
  • Drooled over an experienced Developmental Editor's (mine or someone else's!) offerings but haven't committed to waiting months for them to be available and investing thousands to get their critical eye on your work
  • Spent oodles of time slogging through books on writing, or spent money on editing or other courses, but got no real answers on how to make your fiction book or memoir as awesome as you know it can be. 
  • Put your draft on the back burner. You're just not sure if it's good enough. 

You've Spent 100's of Hours on Your Draft. Your Book Deserves a Developmental Edit, its Best Chance to SHINE...

 

 Hello, Wonderful Writer!

You have big dreams for your book, getting up early, staying up late, or squeezing writing into your lunch hour to finish your draft. Congrats on writing THE END! 

Now what? You know something's  missing. Is it ready to publish?  You've run a grammar check, and shared it with readers, who each suggested you change something different. You might be tempted to put that draft on a shelf. 

Yet, that niggling voice in the back of your mind whispers that this book will create great change in your life. You need a path to see this project through.

But publishing the draft you have "as is" isn't an option. You want your book to feel polished, affecting the hearts and minds of your readers.

You need the feedback you can only get from a thorough Developmental Edit to light your path to your book's completion. 

Join Suzy's Developmental Editing Mentorship Wait List

You will be added to the wait list for Suzy Vadori's Wicked Good Fiction Bootcamp and Suzy's Inspired Writing Newsletter. You can unsubscribe at any time.

I’m Suzy Vadori - Author, Editor, and Certified Book Coach

I work with writers on hundreds of book drafts each year to make their books the best they can be. Writers I coach are successfully independently published, have won awards, and gotten 6 figure publishing deals.

My wait list for developmental edits is months long. So, I've decided to share my exact methods of evaluating drafts with you in this mentorship, so that you can identify the key opportunities to uplevel your book right away. 4 weeks from now, you'll have all the answers, decided what you're going to change during your revision pass, and have a clear, step-by-step path forward to get it done so you can publish.

It's hard to evaluate your own writing. To give you perspective, I'm going to share the EXACT tools I use to evaluate, so you can see your story's structure with fresh eyes.

I can't wait to work with you and your book, giving you the exact roadmap you need, along with practical examples you can use right away to make sure your book is amazing.

Felicity turned her book idea into a 5 book series

 

It's like I was stumbling around in a temple with a flickering torch -- mostly feeling my way along -- and Suzy turned on the floodlights.

I plotted and wrote a novel applying Suzy's excellent tips, tools, and strategies. I queried this book to a select group of agents and publishers and had a fifty percent full manuscript request and offer rate. I handpicked my dream agent from the offers. I can truly say that Suzy's teaching was an essential part of how I rapidly achieved this goal.

Felicity George, Regency Romance Writer, Author of the Gentlemen of London Series

Turn on the Floodlights for YOUR book!

Introducing...

Suzy's Developmental Editing Mentorship 

A 4-week experience that will give you the skills and exact steps to developmentally edit your book.
  • Take a step back to gain perspective. You'll practice using a series of tools to help you look at the Big Picture of your story and identify any gaps you may have missed when telling it that readers NEED to feel satisfied. 

  • Learn to READ like an editor. I read 2-3 books per week with a critical eye and I'll share my best tips.

  • Break your scenes down into each required element - so you can spot problems fast. 
  • Get me as your virtual Book Coach for 4 weeks! I'll be with you every step of the way to make sure your book gets the attention it deserves!

  • Come away with a detailed action plan and step-by-step tasks to get your revisions done ASAP.

Working with Suzy was like pouring rocket fuel onto my writing career!

 

Suzy’s absolutely brilliant at explaining concepts quickly, and helping me to understand and correct the flaws in my work so that I could reach my potential. I came away from every session feeling confident, inspired, and armed with the knowledge I needed to take my story to the next level. I can’t believe I spent years being terrified of sharing my writing for critique – when working with Suzy was actually a real treat! Now I have an amazing agent and sold my debut novel at a four-way auction, with 15 foreign language rights so far!

Jess Bull, Author of Miss Austen Investigates: The Hapless Milliner

Pour Rocket Fuel on Your Writing Career!

In Your 4-Week Developmental Editing Mentorship, You will get...

 

4 Instructional Modules - Self Directed

Each Monday during the course, you'll get access to all-new lessons, complete with upbeat videos, worksheets, and how-to guides, giving you the roadmap with the step-by-step framework to developmentally edit your draft novel or memoir in just 4 weeks. $1200 value

Real-Time Access to Suzy and Team

You can ask Questions about your specific writing project and get unstuck fast, with answers and support from Suzy, her Team and this amazing community of writers (the most positive writing group out there!) During 2 LIVE sessions per week, plus 24/7 access to the Mentorship Facebook group. 4 weeks of LIVE access $1000 Value

 


Kim found new energy for the book she'd been writing for yeeears

 

My story has been stuck in the mud for ages. Through Suzy's lessons, I am learning to change my mindset on how to approach writing (hint: one size does not fit all!), and very much enjoyed getting encouragement from Suzy. :D

Kim Claussen, Fantasy Writer, Graduate of Wicked Good Fiction Bootcamp
Get Your Story Unstuck

 What’s Inside the Developmental Editing Mentorship...

 Module 1

Big Picture

You'll learn the 3 major steps in the self-evaluation process giving you clarity on where you need to focus and the steps you need to get your book in shape. 

This module teaches you multiple techniques to help you see your story for the first time again, testing what you've actually got on the page to see what's missing, where readers might get lost, or where you'll leave them unsatisfied.

Highlights:

  • Identify any issues you already know your draft has

  • Learn to use my favorite revision tool 

  • Test your book for causation - South Park style

  • Check the elements of your Story Arc, Character Arcs, and Worldbuilding 

  • Create a custom Big Picture Readiness Map for your book

Module 2

Scene Level

In this Module you'll learn to spot any scene elements that aren't yet on your pages.

Highlights:

  • Test the emotional impact of each of your scenes, and learn to rate the effectiveness of what you have so far on the page.

  • Check your character's goals in each scene, and make sure they're linked to your Big Picture.
  • Explore scene level conflict,  keeping your readers hooked in every scene.
  • Learn how to ground readers in every scene and avoid white-room-syndrome
  • Check and craft scene endings to ensure readers will want to keep reading more
Module 3

Road Map

Craft your personalized revision roadmap step-by-step to prioritize and tackle the edits you decide are important, one step at a time (no overwhelm required!)

Highlights:

  • Decide which top areas you want to revise in your book
  • Learn to prioritize the work you know will make your book better over busy work
  • Decide what "finished" looks like for your book
  • Create a list of revisions to tackle, and set a timeline
Module 4

Get it Done!

In our final week together, you'll have evaluated your book, and set a plan. Now it's time to start the important work to get it done.

Highlights:

  • Suzy will share her favorite reading techniques to speed up your revision process
  • Become a pro at taking feedback from yourself and others
  • Know when it's time to stop revising.
  • Start knocking revision tasks off your todo list with Suzy and her team there every step of the way to cheer you on

Join Suzy's Developmental Editing Mentorship Wait List

You will be added to the wait list for Suzy Vadori's Wicked Good Fiction Bootcamp and Suzy's Inspired Writing Newsletter. You can unsubscribe at any time.

Joshua figured out what readers were looking for.

 

Suzy is an amazing editor with an eye not only for technical mishaps that may have been overlooked, but also for plot progression. Suzy digs into each character to aid in their development, and makes them stand out. She is a credit to the industry as both an author and an editor as she knows what works, and more importantly what does not work; especially when it comes to what the reader is looking for. Her talented eye is what every manuscript needs to get that polished look that every author yearns for.

Joshua Kendal, Author of The Crimson Amulet
Find Out What Readers Are Looking For

PLUS These Bonuses are Included... 

 

Prework Module ($500 Value)

Suzy shares some of her best Novel/Memoir planning tools to make sure you are starting your developmental edit in the strongest mindset.

Critique Partner Matchup ($300 Value)

During the Mentorship, you'll have the opportunity (no obligation if you already have an awesome CP!) to participate in our matchup process to find a suitable critique partner. Mentorship members are some of the hardest working writers we know, and a great critique partner who will read your work and give you feedback is worth their weight in gold.

Bonus Hotseat Lessons ($200 Value)

Get a front row seat as Suzy coaches Founding Member pages in her hotseat, sharing valuable and specific feedback that you can apply to your own book.

Suzy's Writing Cheat Sheet Vault ($200 Value)

There are writing concepts that Suzy sees applied incorrectly in drafts over and over again, even by experienced writers! Over the years, Suzy has developed a set of Cheat Sheets to teach these seemingly straight forward (but actually tricky) concepts in plain English, so you'll never get them wrong again.   

Editing Tricks in Word ($100 Value)

An overview of the powerful editing tools available to you in the publishing industry's standard word processor. Many features demonstrated here are also available in other programs you may use. 

  

Total Value of Suzy's Developmental Editing Membership + Included Bonuses: $2500

 

Your Investment when enrolling in the Mentorship is Only: $1200

Compare at $3250 to get on Suzy's Developmental Edit Waitlist

Join Suzy's Developmental Editing Mentorship Wait List

You will be added to the wait list for Suzy Vadori's Wicked Good Fiction Bootcamp and Suzy's Inspired Writing Newsletter. You can unsubscribe at any time.

Are you READY to level up your draft? Join us!

Suzy Vadori's Developmental Editing Mentorship

  • 30+ Video Lessons

    Get Suzy's exact Developmental Editing process that has helped 100's of books get noticed.

  • See Your Book's Big Picture Structure

    Learn Evaluation Tools to gain distance from your writing and see your book the way readers will. 
  • Evaluate Each Scene in Your Book

    Learn the must have elements to create satisfying scenes, spotting what's missing quickly. 

Access 1 new module per week - with time to dive in, master each new concept, and ask questions before moving on. You'll also have access to all materials after the Mentorship ends, so you can complete or revisit them any time.

Join Suzy's Developmental Editing Mentorship Wait List

You will be added to the wait list for Suzy Vadori's Wicked Good Fiction Bootcamp and Suzy's Inspired Writing Newsletter. You can unsubscribe at any time.

Plus, You'll be Backed by a Risk Free 14-Day Guarantee 

I've created my Developmental Editing Mentorship to share everything I know about evaluating a draft, and I am COMMITTED to helping you make your book as strong as it can be.

The lessons included in this unique course have been curated over my decade of working with experts in the writing industry.

But here's the thing. By the end of these 14 days, you'll have received access to the Developmental Editing Mentorship's first two modules, as well as the Prework Bonus module.

You'll have the opportunity to assess your book's Big Picture structure, as well as look at each scene to determine what work you have left to do. You'll also have had the opportunity to participate in 4 LIVE sessions with me to get direct feedback and answers to your burning writing questions BEFORE making a final commitment.

If you don't feel totally confident and motivated to finish your book's developmental edit (and your ability to polish your book like a pro), simply reach out, show us that you've put in the work to complete the assignments in the first two modules, and we'll refund your investment.

Join Suzy's Developmental Editing Mentorship Wait List

You will be added to the wait list for Suzy Vadori's Wicked Good Fiction Bootcamp and Suzy's Inspired Writing Newsletter. You can unsubscribe at any time.

Still not sure if this experience is for you?

Suzy's Developmental Editing Mentorship is perfect for you if… 

  • You have a completed (or nearly completed) draft of your novel or memoir, and that niggling voice inside you wonders if something is missing. Will anybody want to read it? Will they get all the amazing things you set out to say?
  • You want to work with the best editor you can find, but the cost is daunting.
  • You've worked with developmental editors before and found the feedback invaluable but you're ready to do some of this heavy lifting yourself (and save the time and cost!)
  • You’re ready to push yourself out of your comfort zone to make your book the best it can be.
  • You want to pull your book into sharp focus so that readers will stay up all night to finish it, and then lend their copy to a friend.

On the other hand, the Developmental Editing Mentorship isn't for you if...

  • You are writing just for yourself, and never plan to share your writing OR
  • You are okay with publishing your drafts without making them the best they can be, even if you don't build readership...

Join Suzy's Developmental Editing Mentorship Wait List

You will be added to the wait list for Suzy Vadori's Wicked Good Fiction Bootcamp and Suzy's Inspired Writing Newsletter. You can unsubscribe at any time.

Shivani Leveled Up Her Writing

I wanted to work with a coach who was willing to take a beginner like me through the concepts of writing and literally tell me what needed to be done to turn my draft into a proper book. Suzy helped me probe deeper within myself to ask the 'why' for every scene I wrote. This shifted something very profound in me and led to having a big impact not only on my writing but my thinking in general. Suzy has a great structure to teach writers at the beginning level. She starts at the very basic and gradually builds up techniques and skills on that foundation.

Shivani Malik, Women's Fiction Writer

Michelle is engaging readers with dynamic scenes

 

I signed up to work with Suzy because of her amazing knowledge of story structure and her ability to coach and motivate in a way that is unique and effective. I love how Suzy can look at a scene or chapter or novel and immediately see what is wrong and then help you fix it so that your novel becomes the best it can be–one that will engage readers and make you proud that you wrote it.

Michelle Melton Cox, Author Accelerator Book Coach, Mystery Writer

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What people are asking about Suzy's Developmental Editing Mentorship

C.J. Finished their book, which was nominated for a national award...

 

I had a stuck manuscript. I loved the story. I loved my characters. I loved my stupid puns. But it was missing something. The last quarter fell apart and was boring. I got unstuck with Suzy's help, and am developing things into a page-turner full of emotional roller coasters and ticking time bombs.

Now I have a Kobo Emerging Writer award-nominated book and am well on my way to my next book.”

C.J. Banks, Author of Dad Jokes and Pine Cones

Join Suzy's Developmental Editing Mentorship Wait List

You will be added to the wait list for Suzy Vadori's Wicked Good Fiction Bootcamp and Suzy's Inspired Writing Newsletter. You can unsubscribe at any time.