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Want to know if readers, agents, or publishers will LOVE your book?

You can learn to read your own writing with an editor's eye.

 

I’ve helped hundreds of new and experienced writers to get their books ready for publishing with a developmental edit, and I've always wished I could bottle the knowledge I've developed, to help writers see how to make their books the best they can be for themselves. 

 This 4 week Mentorship is designed to do just that - help you identify red flags in your writing, and teach you how to fix them, BEFORE your book gets into readers' hands. 

 

Maybe you’ve…

  • Stared at your draft for ages, rewriting sentences, paragraphs or scenes, wondering if you're making it better or worse
  • Shared your draft with friends or family, who say "great job!" but don't have the skills to show you what's still missing
  • Gotten feedback from readers, critique partners, or inexpensive editors, and their advice is conflicting
  • Wished you could afford a truly pro editor to help you figure out where to spend your energy?
  • Read oodles of writing craft books or bought courses that gave you no real answers to improve your writing 
  • Put your draft on the back burner because you're just not sure if it's good enough, or what your next steps might be 

You've Spent 100's of Hours on Your Draft. Your Book Deserves its Best Chance to SHINE...

 

 Hello, Wonderful Writer!

You have big dreams for your book, getting up early, staying up late, or squeezing writing into your lunch hour to finish your draft. Congrats on writing THE END! 

Now what? You know something's  missing. You're pretty sure it's not ready to publish.  You've run a grammar check, and shared it with readers, who each suggested you change something different. You might be tempted to put that draft on a shelf. 

Yet, that persistent voice in the back of your mind whispers that this book will create great change in your life. You need a path to see this project through.

But publishing your draft  "as is" isn't an option. You want your book to feel polished, affecting the hearts and minds of your readers.

You need the feedback you can only get from a Developmental Edit to light your path to your book's completion. 

Join Suzy's Developmental Editing Mentorship Wait List

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I’m Suzy Vadori - Author, Editor, and Certified Book Coach

I work with writers on hundreds of book drafts each year to make their books the best they can be. Writers I coach successfully publish independently, have won awards, and even landed 6 figure publishing deals. Every writer has their own publishing goals, but we all have something in common - we hope the book we write is LOVED by readers as much as we love it ourselves.

My wait list for developmental edits is months long. So, I've decided to share my exact methods of evaluating drafts with you in this mentorship, so that you can identify the key opportunities to uplevel your book right away. 4 weeks from now, you'll have all the answers, decided what you're going to change during your revision pass, and have a clear, step-by-step path forward to get it done so you can publish.

It's hard (impossible, even!) to evaluate your own writing. To give you perspective, I'm going to share the EXACT tools I use to evaluate, so you can see your story's structure with fresh eyes. And I'll be with you every step of the way.

I can't wait to work with you and your book, giving you the exact roadmap you need, along with practical examples you can use right away to make sure your book is as amazing as you know it can be.

Melanie Found her "Aha" Moment

 

“Suzy's Developmental Editing Mentorship was a safe and nurturing (and enthusiastic) space in which to learn and move out of my comfort zone. Team Suzy was super supportive and the community was humming with "aha" moments. Highly recommended.”

Melanie Marttila, Graduate of Developmental Editing Mentorship

Find YOUR Aha Moment!

Introducing...

Suzy's Developmental Editing Mentorship 

A 4-week experience that will give you the skills and exact steps to developmentally edit your book like a pro.
  • Take a step back to gain perspective. You'll practice using a series of tools to help you look at the Big Picture of your story and identify any gaps you may have missed when telling it that readers NEED to feel satisfied. 

  • Learn to READ like an editor. I read 2-3 books per week with a critical eye and I'll share my best tips.

  • Break your scenes down into each required element - so you can spot problems fast. 
  • Get me as your virtual Book Coach for 4 weeks! I'll be with you every step of the way to make sure your book gets the attention it deserves!

  • Come away with a detailed action plan and step-by-step tasks to get your revisions done ASAP.

Phyllis Fixed Her Draft so She Could Query

 

“Before I found Suzy's workshops, I had three edits and one developmental edit from other experts on my memoir. They left me defeated and uninspired until I found Suzy's materials.

After taking the Developmental Edit Mentorship, I gained the skills and confidence to take the giant step of submitting 5 initial queries to agents. I made a more compact, impactful draft. I was able to go into the developmental edit process as a participant/critic rather than a consumer of a developmental edit. Thank you, Suzy!!!"

Phyllis Heintz, Memoir Writer, Graduate of Developmental Editing Mentorship

Get Your Draft Ready to Submit!

In Your 4-Week Developmental Editing Mentorship, You will get...

 

4 Instructional Modules - Self Directed

Each Monday during the course, you'll get access to all-new lessons, complete with upbeat videos, worksheets, and how-to guides, giving you the roadmap with the step-by-step framework to developmentally edit your draft novel or memoir in just 4 weeks. $1200 value

Real-Time Access to Suzy and Team

You can ask Questions about your specific writing project and get unstuck fast, with answers and support from Suzy, her Team and this amazing community of writers (the most positive writing group out there!) During 2 LIVE sessions per week, plus 24/7 access to the Mentorship Facebook group. 4 weeks of LIVE access $1000 Value

 


Sam Found the Mindset to Reach for Her Dreams

 

“The program put me back in the right frame of mind. I have a busy life and writing always took a backseat to everything else that needed to be accomplished. The DEM reminded me of what I really want and that I have the potential to reach for my dreams of being a published author.”

Sam Kirilo, Fantasy Writer, Graduate of Developmental Editing Mentorship
Reach for Your DREAMS

 What’s Inside the Developmental Editing Mentorship...

 Module 1

Big Picture

You'll learn the 3 major steps in the self-evaluation process giving you clarity on where you need to focus and the steps you need to get your book in shape. 

This module teaches you multiple techniques to help you see your story for the first time again, testing what you've actually got on the page to see what's missing, where readers might get lost, or where you'll leave them unsatisfied.

Highlights:

  • Identify any issues you already know your draft has

  • Learn to use my favorite revision tool 

  • Test your book for causation - South Park style

  • Check the elements of your Story Arc, Character Arcs, and Worldbuilding 

  • Create a custom Big Picture Readiness Map for your book

Module 2

Scene Level

In this Module you'll learn to spot any scene elements that aren't yet on your pages.

Highlights:

  • Test the emotional impact of each of your scenes, and learn to rate the effectiveness of what you have so far on the page.

  • Check your character's goals in each scene, and make sure they're linked to your Big Picture.
  • Explore scene level conflict,  keeping your readers hooked in every scene.
  • Learn how to ground readers in every scene and avoid white-room-syndrome
  • Check and craft scene endings to ensure readers will want to keep reading more
Module 3

Road Map

Craft your personalized revision roadmap step-by-step to prioritize and tackle the edits you decide are important, one step at a time (no overwhelm required!)

Highlights:

  • Decide which top areas you want to revise in your book
  • Learn to prioritize the work you know will make your book better over busy work
  • Decide what "finished" looks like for your book
  • Create a list of revisions to tackle, and set a timeline
Module 4

Get it Done!

In our final week together, you'll have evaluated your book, and set a plan. Now it's time to start the important work to get it done.

Highlights:

  • Suzy will share her favorite reading techniques to speed up your revision process
  • Become a pro at taking feedback from yourself and others
  • Know when it's time to stop revising.
  • Start knocking revision tasks off your todo list with Suzy and her team there every step of the way to cheer you on

Join Suzy's Developmental Editing Mentorship Wait List

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Jackie Discovered the Tools to Write Her Story, Her Way

 

Suzy is so personable and genuinely wants to share her experience and knowledge to help as many writers as she can. I went into it feeling out of place, like an imposter, and came out knowing I have the tools to write my story the way I want to that will grab my audience and hold them on the edge of their seat all the way to The End.

 

Jackie Mercer , YA Fantasy Writer, Graduate of Developmental Editing Mentorship
Write Your Story, YOUR WAY

PLUS These Bonuses are Included... 

 

Prework Module ($500 Value)

Suzy shares some of her best Novel/Memoir planning tools to make sure you are starting your developmental edit in the strongest mindset.

Critique Partner Matchup ($300 Value)

During the Mentorship, you'll have the opportunity (no obligation if you already have an awesome CP!) to participate in our matchup process to find a suitable critique partner. Mentorship members are some of the hardest working writers we know, and a great critique partner who will read your work and give you feedback is worth their weight in gold.

Bonus Hotseat Lessons ($200 Value)

Get a front row seat as Suzy coaches Founding Member pages in her hotseat, sharing valuable and specific feedback that you can apply to your own book.

Suzy's Writing Cheat Sheet Vault ($200 Value)

There are writing concepts that Suzy sees applied incorrectly in drafts over and over again, even by experienced writers! Over the years, Suzy has developed a set of Cheat Sheets to teach these seemingly straight forward (but actually tricky) concepts in plain English, so you'll never get them wrong again.   

Editing Tricks in Word ($100 Value)

An overview of the powerful editing tools available to you in the publishing industry's standard word processor. Many features demonstrated here are also available in other programs you may use. 

  

Total Value of Suzy's Developmental Editing Membership + Included Bonuses: $2500

 

Your Investment when enrolling in the Mentorship is Only: $1200

Compare at $3250 to get on Suzy's Developmental Edit Waitlist

Join Suzy's Developmental Editing Mentorship Wait List

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Are you READY to level up your draft? Join us!

Suzy Vadori's Developmental Editing Mentorship

  • 30+ Video Lessons

    Get Suzy's exact Developmental Editing process that has helped 100's of books get noticed.

  • See Your Book's Big Picture Structure

    Learn Evaluation Tools to gain distance from your writing and see your book the way readers will. 
  • Evaluate Each Scene in Your Book

    Learn the must have elements to create satisfying scenes, spotting what's missing quickly. 

Access 1 new module per week - with time to dive in, master each new concept, and ask questions before moving on. You'll also have access to all materials after the Mentorship ends, so you can complete or revisit them any time.

Join Suzy's Developmental Editing Mentorship Wait List

You will be added to the wait list for Suzy Vadori's Developmental Editing Mentorship and Suzy's Inspired Writing Newsletter. You can unsubscribe at any time.

Plus, You'll be Backed by a Risk Free 14-Day Guarantee 

I've created my Developmental Editing Mentorship to share everything I know about evaluating a draft, and I am COMMITTED to helping you make your book as strong as it can be.

The lessons included in this unique course have been curated over my decade of working with experts in the writing industry.

But here's the thing. By the end of these 14 days, you'll have received access to the Developmental Editing Mentorship's first two modules, as well as the Prework Bonus module.

You'll have the opportunity to assess your book's Big Picture structure, as well as look at each scene to determine what work you have left to do. You'll also have had the opportunity to participate in 4 LIVE sessions with me to get direct feedback and answers to your burning writing questions BEFORE making a final commitment.

If you don't feel totally confident and motivated to finish your book's developmental edit (and your ability to polish your book like a pro), simply reach out, show us that you've put in the work to complete the assignments in the first two modules, and we'll refund your investment.

Join Suzy's Developmental Editing Mentorship Wait List

You will be added to the wait list for Suzy Vadori's Developmental Editing Mentorship and Suzy's Inspired Writing Newsletter. You can unsubscribe at any time.

Still not sure if this experience is for you?

Suzy's Developmental Editing Mentorship is perfect for you if… 

  • You have a completed (or nearly completed) draft of your novel or memoir, and that niggling voice inside you wonders if something is missing. Will anybody want to read it? Will they get all the amazing things you set out to say?
  • You want to work with the best editor you can find, but the cost is daunting.
  • You've worked with developmental editors before and found the feedback invaluable but you're ready to do some of this heavy lifting yourself (and save the time and cost!)
  • You’re ready to push yourself out of your comfort zone to make your book the best it can be.
  • You want to pull your book into sharp focus so that readers will stay up all night to finish it, and then lend their copy to a friend.

On the other hand, the Developmental Editing Mentorship isn't for you if...

  • You are writing just for yourself, and never plan to share your writing OR
  • You are okay with publishing your drafts without making them the best they can be, even if you don't build readership...

Toni Overcame her Overwhelm

Because I've never written a book, it feels overwhelming trying to put it all together into a final draft, but you have made it seem much more manageable with each step. Not only has the content of this course gotten me to believe that I can finish this, but your enthusiasm is contagious and inspiring. I am so excited to have a direction and a goal. Thank you Suzy. This has been life-changing for me.

Toni Eubanks, Graduate of Developmental Editing Mentorship

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Susan Made Valuable Connections

 

“It was so much more I was hoping to connect with other writers and get info to help me but I learned so much and made connections I never expected. Great experience all around.”

Susan McKelvey, Memoir Writer, Graduate of Developmental Editing Mentorship

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Anna found the guidance she needed

 

“Suzy's passion for helping writers is inspiring. The guidance and tools presented in this program is valuable to any writer - new or seasoned.”

Anna Rosati, YA Writer, Graduate of Developmental Editing Mentorship

Join Suzy's Developmental Editing Mentorship Wait List

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